From a5352ea20b819be017d1240cba9d87667375ae8e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alexis Werefox <adh9694@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 2 May 2021 00:04:34 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading, fixing typos, adding a bit more last minute
 info.

---
 src/info/components/server-block.js      |  4 ++--
 src/info/js/variables.js                 | 21 +++++++++++----------
 src/info/pages/identities/neuro/index.js | 10 ++++++----
 3 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/info/components/server-block.js b/src/info/components/server-block.js
index bc8ad1e..41d0495 100644
--- a/src/info/components/server-block.js
+++ b/src/info/components/server-block.js
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ export default function ServerBlock({}) {
   return (
     <div className="p-4 w-full inline-flow align-middle justify-center space-y-4">
       <p className="w-full text-lg text-center text-werefox-blue-dark dark:text-werefox-blue">
-        All the stuff I run uses the following server machines, with a reverse
-        SSH connection to a{" "}
+        All the stuff I run uses the following server machines with reverse
+        SSH connections to a{" "}
         <Link href="https://www.linode.com/?r=61251dc51397edcfacadd7f3744b258b63ad4248">
           <a
             target="_blank"
diff --git a/src/info/js/variables.js b/src/info/js/variables.js
index e7f346c..6a9a329 100644
--- a/src/info/js/variables.js
+++ b/src/info/js/variables.js
@@ -292,8 +292,8 @@ export const FAQS = {
     alt: "Alexis winking and giving a peace sign",
   },
   q3: {
-    question: `"How do I get more Xenia stickers?"`,
-    answer: `Yeah, about that. So, I've made a few posts aobut this, but when 
+    question: `"How do I get those Xenia stickers?"`,
+    answer: `Yeah, about that. So, I've made a few posts about this, but when 
         I first started giving those out, I was in a good financial position, among 
         other things. Now I'm not! I will get to it when I do.`,
     src: "/images/alexis_annoyed.png",
@@ -359,9 +359,9 @@ export const PROJECTS = {
     new_tab: true,
     src: "/emoji/pen.svg",
     alt: "Pen emoji",
-    description: `Sometimes, I write poetry. It's not the happiest
-    always, but I am proud of it. It would mean a lot if you took
-    a look!`,
+    description: `Sometimes, I write poetry. It's not always the 
+    happiest, but I am proud of it. It would mean a lot to me if 
+    you took a look!`,
   },
   Blog: {
     url: "https://werefox.dev",
@@ -383,9 +383,10 @@ export const PROJECTS = {
     url: "/projects/private",
     src: "/emoji/no_entry.svg",
     alt: "No entry emoji",
-    description: `Here are some other things that I host for myself
-    some of these are public, but I only give myself access, and I
-    have no plans on making them public.`,
+    description: `Here are some other things that I host for myself,
+    some of these can be accessed on the internet, but I only give 
+    myself login access, and I have no plans on giving access to the 
+    public.`,
   },
   "Other Stuff": {
     url: "/projects/other",
@@ -467,7 +468,7 @@ export const STREAMING = {
     new_tab: true,
     src: "/emoji/twitch-logo.png",
     alt: "The Twtich logo",
-    description: `First of all, here's a link to my Twitch channel! That's where I do my
+    description: `Here's a link to my Twitch channel! That's where I do my
     streams currently. I've been idly contemplating Owncast at some point, but at the
     moment with my current setup, it isn't really feasible, unfortunately.`,
   },
@@ -529,7 +530,7 @@ export const OTHER = {
     new_tab: true,
     src: "/emoji/studio_microphone.svg",
     alt: "Microphone emoji",
-    description: `*Nervous sweating* Heh! sometimes I write some music!? You're free to take a
+    description: `*Nervous sweating* Heh! Sometimes I write some music!? You're free to take a
     listen if you want! Let me know what you think! It's usually based on my poetry.`,
   },
 };
diff --git a/src/info/pages/identities/neuro/index.js b/src/info/pages/identities/neuro/index.js
index 7fc904d..76d0112 100644
--- a/src/info/pages/identities/neuro/index.js
+++ b/src/info/pages/identities/neuro/index.js
@@ -17,10 +17,12 @@ export default function Neurodiversity() {
           symptom2: `- Impulsiveness`,
           symptom3: `- Impaired ability to multitask`,
           symptom4: `- Time management issues`,
-          symptom5: `- Difficulty remembering things (especially details and things we don't find stimulating)`,
-          symptom6: `- Emotional dysregularity (we have trouble regulating our emotions!)`,
-          symptom7: `- Last, but not least, is something called "rejection sensitivity", which can be hard to explain, and isn't technically medically accepted, but is proven to be a common symptom among ADHD folks!`,
-          medical1: `Two basic things you should recgonize about why we are this way is that for one, we don't receive enough dopamine for accomplishing things compared to neurotypicals, and it makes doing things we don't like incredibly dreadful, and gives us a bit of a dependence on receiving more constantly.`,
+          simpyom5: `- Executive dysfunction (complicated, but basically an inability to do things right away)`,
+          symptom6: `- Difficulty remembering things (especially details and things we don't find stimulating)`,
+          symptom7: `- Emotional dysregularity (we have trouble regulating our emotions!)`,
+          symptom8: `- Last, but not least, is something called "rejection sensitivity", which can be hard to explain, but is essentially an extreme sensitivity to isolation, to the point where we will make up (often harmful and incorrect) reasons for why others must be avoiding us.`,
+          rejection: `It isn't technically medically accepted, but is proven to be a common symptom among ADHD folks!`,
+          medical1: `Two basic things you should recgonize about why we are this way is that for one, we don't receive enough Dopamine for accomplishing things compared to neurotypicals, and it makes doing things we don't like incredibly dreadful, and gives us a bit of a dependence on receiving more Dopamine constantly.`,
           medical2: `Second, the part of our brain that manages emotional regulation is underdeveloped, which makes our capacity for controlling emotions comparable sometimes to that of a child.`,
           conclusion: `There's a lot more I wish I could say, but I can genuinely recommend the following link to the YouTube channel "How to ADHD" if you want to learn more, especially if you believe you have this disorder yourself!`,
         }}